I learnt how to make a picture in the readers mind.
I think I should work on not just saying I feel, I smell, I hear, I see, etc I should describe it instead.
We had to write a story about miss coads great grandma and it had to be about one of her expirences
In life, we used a adding detail chart to help us with our story's
This is a picture of my story
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